A year ago, I came to Saigon to continue studying at university. There are so many interesting things to see and explore in Saigon. But, this was the first time; I lived far away my family and always felt homesick. Now, a year went by, I was came back to spend my summer holiday.
My hometown is far from Saigon and I spent more 8 hours by the train. On the way home, I was very glad at the prospect of seeing my family. When I was in front of the house, I recognized familiar road, an old big tree and some kids were playing game.My family said: “What a wonderful surprise” when they looked me and hugged me so strong. My father said that I had become a real student and a beautiful girl. It was the happiest time I came back my house. I was very surprised to find that almost everything had been changed. The living room has a large TV, some new sofas. It looked so neat and tidy. My room was more beautiful with a new bad, some nice chairs and family’s picture hanged on the wall. While my father was cooking dinner, my little brother and I were relating all what had happened during a year. I realized that I miss my family so much. Later, we went down to the dining room where a nice meal was ready for us. My father said: “you must eat so much after a long journey”. I was enjoying a meal with happy and close feeling.
After returning my dormitory, I realized that no place like home. My home is the best place I feel peaceful and comfortable. I’m looking forward to the next summer holiday to return my house.
Thứ Sáu, 20 tháng 11, 2009
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