Each of us has our own hometown. Hometown is where we are spend a lot of time to live with our family together and to know about what hometown has. My hometown is Nha trang city, which is a wonderful land. It plays an important role in my life and has many wonderful memories of my childhood.
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Para1: My hometown plays an important role in my life not only thinking but also characteristic.
About person and beautiful scenes
About natural brings me to think careful
So, I always think careful before I decide to do something
Para 2: When I was a little girl, I had many wonderful memories about the beach
I often go to beach every morning and enjoy the fresh air with my family
Playing many game with my friends on the beach
So, beach is a part of my life
Conclusion: up to now, when I studied at university in HCM city, I still love spending time of my childhood.
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Trả lờiXóa- Grammar: fair
Trả lờiXóa+where we are spend a lot of time
+I always think careful
+go to beach
- Ideas: good
The introduction should be rewritten because of grammatical mistakes.
Trả lờiXóaIdeas: About person and beautiful scenes : how does it affect your characters?