Each of us has our own hometown where we were born, brought up and spent a lot of time with our family. So, everyone when going far away is always remember it with a profound feeling. And I’m one of the people who have many wonderful memories and play an important role in my life at my hometown, Nha Trang city.
My childhood have many wonderful memories about the beach. The first time I saw the beach, I have a wonderful feeling in my eyes, especially when the sun rises in the east. The sun seemed to be brighter delivering the light everywhere. I always went to the beach to swim and enjoy the fresh air. On the weekend, I and my friends spent most of leisure time to sit on the soft grass and hear the songs of birds above our head. It was very fantastic senses to enjoy.
However, the best thing about my hometown is the people, whom play an important role in my characteristic. They are kind, hospitable and happy of welcome visitors in for tea. They try to help each other in some difficulties and share happiness in good time. It’s seemed that we are all one big happy family. So, I always feel happy and proud of when I lived with them. Because they help me study the ways to take care of myself and people lives around me. They open my mind and affect on my life to be a good person.
Though I am far from now, I often miss my hometown with beautiful senses and friendly people. I love spending all time on sitting together in the evening and taking comfort with all of the members in my family like when I was a little girl
Thứ Sáu, 23 tháng 10, 2009
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