Each of us has a secret place for ourselves. That is a place we can relax, enjoy the life after hard working hours and the burdens of life. It cans a coffee shop, a small garden in front of the house, a river… To me, whenever tired with working and studying, I usually walk into the park to recover a peace of my mind.
I usually walk into the park at the weekend. At that time, everyone seems to have a better feeling and comfortable mood. The weather is quite cool and the fresh air on the Sunday afternoon. Everything is peaceful and silent. I walk around the big trees and sit down under the shadow. The vivid green of grass has a refreshing feeling effect on my eyes. The flowers are opening with the pink and white colors. It is so lovely with their green background. Some benches around me are gradually occupied by people. There are many people consisting of single persons, couples or dancing groups… A man is listening to a beautiful melody of his favorite songs. A young couple is whispering soft with their stories. In the middle of the park, there is a pool with the status of Hercules in the center, spouting up and down water, all day and night. It is a wonderful scene to enjoy.
In the park, I feel better to relax and discover everything around me that I rarely care of in my life. And it makes me get over stress of hard studying.
Thứ Năm, 12 tháng 11, 2009
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