More and more students are doing part-time job today. Part-time job is a part of the student’s life not only helps them earn some money but also can get useful working experiences and learn the value of labor.
There are many advantages for student to have a part-time job. A part-time job brings students more money and helps them to reduce their parents’ economic burdens. Students have many choice to find a suitable for a job such as : tutor, selling, tour guide…. Working part-time job give students a lot of opportunity to know more of social and build up themselves-confident. Because they will contact of with many different kinds of people and learn a lot of knowledge from them to practice their sociable abilities, which are of great help to their future careers. For example, when student become a tutor, they will meet a small family, contact and communicate together to more understand about family, study….However, some people say that part-time job brings some disadvantages to the students. Because it may affect their studies, relax and sleep if they spend all time to work and come back with tiredness. And as a result, their studies are going down. In my opinion, the student should keep a balance between study and the job to have a best result in their future careers.
Part-time job give the student some advantages and disadvantages. But, we should encourage them to have a good job and best attitude working. A good part-time job will enrich their life
Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009
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